Editorial rubric · version 1.0

Message Clarity Review Rubric

A pre-field heuristic for finding unclear, unsupported, or untestable messages. It is not a validated scale, population norm, market average, or performance prediction.

Dimension0 · Blocking gap1 · Partly ready2 · Review-ready

Clarity

0 · Blocking gapMeaning is materially ambiguous or internally inconsistent.

1 · Partly readyCore meaning is recoverable, but important wording needs clarification.

2 · Review-readyOne principal meaning is concise and consistently restatable.

Evidence fit

0 · Blocking gapA material express or implied claim lacks identified support.

1 · Partly readySupport exists, but a boundary, version, owner, or review date is unclear.

2 · Review-readyEvery material claim maps to current support that covers its stated scope.

Audience relevance

0 · Blocking gapNo documented audience need connects to the promised benefit.

1 · Partly readyThe need is plausible, but the rationale relies mainly on team intuition.

2 · Review-readyThe benefit answers a documented need for the defined audience and context.

Distinctiveness

0 · Blocking gapA plausible competitor could use the message unchanged.

1 · Partly readySome specific proof or framing appears, but the difference is not yet defensible.

2 · Review-readyThe message is recognizably tied to a verified product or service difference.

Actionability

0 · Blocking gapThe next step is missing, inaccurate, or materially mismatched.

1 · Partly readyA next step exists, but its effort, conditions, or destination need clarification.

2 · Review-readyThe next step accurately describes what happens and the material effort required.

Use the blockers, not the total

Score each dimension independently and write a reason. Any zero means revise before recruiting respondents. With no zeros, two or more ones call for a second editorial review. With no zeros and no more than one one, the message is ready for respondent pretesting—not proven effective. The total is retained only as a compact record; do not convert it to a percentage or average away a blocking gap.

Review the whole experience

Score the headline, body, image, qualifier, call to action, and destination together. A clear sentence can still fail when its visual implies a broader result, its evidence excludes the advertised audience, or a “Start free” button leads to a required sales call.

Calibrate without manufacturing certainty

Have two reviewers score independently before discussion. Compare the evidence behind each zero or one and preserve disagreements in the decision record. The rubric has not been normed or tested for inter-rater reliability; reviewer agreement does not validate the message.

Worked example

Consider the fictional line “Halve your reporting time with Northstar. Start free.” Assume Northstar can connect two data sources, but no comparative time study exists and the button opens a sales-demo form. A reviewer could record clarity 2, evidence fit 0, relevance 1, distinctiveness 0, and actionability 0. The three zeros—not the 3/10 total—require revision.

A narrower version might be “Bring weekly sales and support data into one reporting workspace. Preview the workflow.” If each function and the preview destination is verified, it may clear the blocking gaps. It still needs respondent pretesting for intended and false takeaways.

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